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Dear Lola,
I hope, i would not ban you from my laptop and mobile devices for this suspense is getting way too much. I start Mondays thinking we would soon get to the end of the story and then Friday arrives and the twist is worse off than where Monday started.
You are a good writer but please do not torture your readers with a good story. I have exams starting next week and all I do daily is thinking and postulating the likely decisions Jumoke would end up taking. I have to keep reminding myself that it is all fiction.
Lola jo, let us hurry up and end this story. If you have work to give us to enable you conclude, please send the task and let your readers sort it out sharply.
Regards.
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We Knew Them Part 34
If Jumoke makes the mistake of going back to Lanre then she is in for a bigger mistake than the first. Lanre is not even a straight forward person compared to Derrick.He hides a lot of things from his fiancee and all that. How can you use a kiss to disarm a woman who is already on the edge. Derrick would have just gone if he was in Lanre’so shoes.I am not even saying the storyline should not have Jumoke going back to Lanre but make sure you include where she was bitten twice.
We Knew Them Part 34
lanre and Jumoke is a no no. Team Derrick all the way
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I never hesperedit it. well-done |Lola
We Knew Them Part 34
Now I have to wait till Monday..hmm!
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