Comment on The Family Part 7 by vivian.
U welcome.i really enjoy reading ur books.pls keep it up.
One more place u made the mistake though…’Elizabeth is not a very understanding person and she can send yo…. ‘
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Nice.however u mistakenly called Rhonda, Elizabeth. Thot she was mama Eli and not aunty Eli.check where Niniola is telling her mom about the money
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Niniola was desperate for money. She feared for her mother’s safety and she wanted to get her away from her father-in-law as soon as possible.
Is that supposed to be father in law or step father.great job sis.keep up the good work
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