Comment on The Family Part 13 by Dapo.
Somehow I hope Mama Ayo will be pushed to seek God. Well done aunty Lola
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Well done sis.
Toye is a typical human being with realistic struggles. But please don’t let him derail…….
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Thanks and looking forward to more.
Dapo.
The Family Part 35
I FELL IN LOVE WITH SOCIAL MEDIA AGAIN AFTER A VERY LONG BREAK AND ALL BECAUSE I WAS INTRODUCED TO “NINIOLA” (WELL LIKE MY AUNTY WHO INTRODUCED ME TO IT SAYS – THATS MY OWN TITLE FOR THE HOUSE)
PLEASE THIS ENDING WAS TOO HURRIEDLY DONE. YOU WILL HAVE TO REWRITE IT O! AH! YES NA! IMAGINE YOU ARE ON A TRIP TO A VERY LOVELY PLACE AND YOU ARE ALREADY ANTICIPATING HOW SMOOTH THE LANDING WILL BE , THE NICE PEOPLE YOU”LL GET TO MEET, ETC ETC AND THEN GBOSA! THE JOURNEY JUST STOPS IN THE MIDDLE OF NOWHERE AND YOU LAND GBAM! JUST LIKE THAT. PLEASE AUNTY LOLA MY NAME SAKE I BEG OF YOU, PLEASE REDO THIS ENDING. THIS STORY IS TOOOOO SWEET TO END JUST LIKE THIS AAAAAHHHH! PPLLLEEEEAAASSSEEEE! BUT IN FAIRNESS TO YOU, THE STORY WAS GOOD. KUDOS! JOB WELLDONE! YOU ARE INDEED A GIFTED WRITER AND WE SEE U GOING PLACES. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
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Well done Lola!
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Well done ma’am!
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