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We Knew Them Part 34


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“You really should learn to mind your business.”

“That’s your response?” Gbemi said.

“Yes.” Lanre replied and slid off the stool he had been sitting on. “I’m not cheating on Toyin, no matter what you heard or think you heard.”

“I didn’t say anything about cheating. Is that your guilty conscience speaking?”

“Good night.” He said, walking past her.

“I told you, I won’t let you hurt Toyin, and I mean it.”

“But you’re perfectly alright with hurting her aren’t you?”

“What do you mean?”

“Your friend is pregnant, are you going to put her in distress because you suspect me of something?”

Gbemi looked at him angrily, he had touched a nerve. She wasn’t going to distress her friend with baseless suspicions, yet she knew that Lanre was hiding something.

“Your life would be better, if you invested half the time you invest in others’ lives, in yours.” He said scathingly and left her standing at the counter.

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“You need to tell her everything.” Gloria said to Jumoke.

“I don’t want to.”


“She’ll never believe me. She’ll think I’m probably making things up so I can look good.”

“I doubt that.”

Jumoke laughed dryly. “I want to doubt it too but I know that’s what will happen. She thinks her father is a knight in shining armor, there’s nothing I can do to change that impression.”

Gloria sighed. “I hate what’s going on between you two.”

“I hate it too.” Jumoke replied dully. “That child is so ungrateful! I should never have let her see Lanre.”

“It was only a matter of time Jumoke.”

The two were silent for a while.

“So what are you going to do?”

“Nothing. She’s not going to see Lanre anymore.”

“I don’t think that’s a good idea. You’ll only make her pine for him and make yourself look bad.”

“I struggled to raise this child all on my own Gloria, I’m not going to let him take away my right to a child that he wouldn’t even have seen if not for coincidence!”

“I hear you Jummy, but, and I hate to say this, you’ve opened a door that you just can’t slam. They’ve seen each other now, the best you can do is supervised visitation…”

“Or maybe we should go back to London…”

“When you’ve just become a partner?”

Jumoke sighed and started to cry. “It’s painful Gloria, the child I suffered so much for is now spiting me. Is this what I deserve?”

Gloria held her friend and sighed.

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“What happened between you and Hope?” Lanre asked Jumoke over the phone two days later.

“What are you talking about?” she asked surprised wondering how he could have known what happened in their home.

“You slapped her…”

“First of all, how do you know that?”

Lanre exhaled sharply, he hadn’t thought through his actions. Jumoke would now know that he and Hope had been having telephone conversations.

“We need to talk…”

“We’re talking now. How did you know what’s going on in my home?”

“Isn’t it possible for us to have a civil conversation? I just want to talk.”

“You don’t get to ask for a civil conversation Lanre. We could have had civil conversations twelve years ago. Don’t open your mouth and talk as if you even deserve this telephone ovation we’re having. Now tell me how you knew what was happening in my house, because there’s no way you could have known that if Hope hadn’t told you… oh my God, she found a way of telling you didn’t she?”


She immediately hung up and called Hope’s school, where she told her class coordinator to promptly seize her daughter’s mobile phone.



“You’ve been talking to him without my permission? Every night, when you should be asleep? What is going on with you Hope? Did I not teach you better than to go talking to him behind my back?”

“He’s my Dad, mum!”

“And you’re still justifying yourself?”

“No, I’m just trying to explain why…”

“I didn’t ask for your explanation! You’ve betrayed my trust, you don’t get a phone until you can prove to me that I can trust you not to give your phone number to random people.”

“Mum… please!” Hope cried. “I’m sorry!”

“Yeah, me too. Please go to your room.”

Hope sobbed as she walked out of her room.

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Derick sighed.

“I think you need to cut her some slack.” He said, after he and Jumoke had had dinner in her house the next night.

“What are you saying?” Jumoke replied irritably.

“She made a mistake and you have every right to be offended but try not to be too harsh on her.”

“Did you hear everything I said that she did…?”


“And you heard when me when I said that she gave her number to Lanre without my consent?”


“So how can you sit there and tell me to cut her some slack?”

“Listen to me Jumoke…”

“No, no, no. I’ve listened to you enough! All of this is your fault! If I had stuck to my way, this issue wouldn’t even have come up, because I never would have let her see that man. But I decided to listen to your wise counsel, even though I felt that I was doing the wrong thing. Now I’m dealing with this mess and all you can tell me is to listen to you again?”


“I think you should leave…”


“My greatest mistake was getting parenting advice from someone who’s not even a parent. Please leave!”

Without another word, Derick got up and left her house.

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Lanre was waiting by Jumoke’s car when she got to the parking lot the next evening.

“You sneaky, irresponsible, man!”

“I’m sorry Jumoke…”

“I didn’t ask for your apology. How did you know my car?”

“I told them I had a gift for you….”

“And they let you…” Jumoke was furious, she walked to the gate and called one of the guards.

“Yes ma!” The man said when he got to her.

“Why did you show this man my car?”

“He said he’s your boyfriend ma!”

“And you believed him? What if he had a bomb? I hope he tipped you well enough because your work here is finished. Don’t come back tomorrow…”

“Ah madam please!” the man prostrated begging.

“Get out of my sight and don’t ever let me see you here again!” she yelled and walked away towards her car.

“Get out of my way,” she said to Lanre.

“Please Jumoke, let’s talk.”

“You know I really, really, want to smack you silly. You seem to have a huge problem knowing the appropriate time to talk. You go behind my back to have whatever conversations with my child and then you come here and ask us to talk because I found out? You are so clueless as a father! She gave you her number and instead of you to have let her know it’s wrong to give strangers her number, you took it and started having midnight conversations with her! You are such a despicable human being and I wish to God I never met you!”

“I’m really trying here Jumoke.” Lanre was fed up of Jumoke’s harshness. “I made a mistake and I’m trying to correct it…”

“By being sneaky?”

“I made a mistake…”

“You mean you made a mistake again? You seem to be an expert at making mistakes.”

“I can only stand this verbal abuse for a while, you’re really pushing it.” Lanre said irritably.

Jumoke boiled with rage. “I’m really pushing it?” she hit him with her bag. “I haven’t even started to push anything!”

“Get yourself together!”

“I am together! You don’t want to see me lose it, because you’ve had it coming…”

“Oh please! I made a mistake, we all have! I’m not going to let you make me feel guilty forever.”

“That’s your business. I don’t even know why I’m wasting my time talking to you. Just stay away from us.”

“I want to be a part of my daughter’s life…”

“Whatever!” she replied opening the door to her car.

“I’m serious!” he said, holding her arm.

“Get your hands off me!”

“I’m serious, I want to be a part of my daughter’s life.” he replied holding on to her arm.

“I said get your hands off me!” she yelled, hitting him on the chest violently.

“I’m warning you!”

“And I am warning you! Get your hands off me!”

In a swift movement, Lanre pulled her closer and kissed her lips hard. Jumoke pushed against him, trying to get herself out of his embrace but his grip was tight, his lips tingling her in the most intimate places, reminding her of one afternoon twelve years ago.

Jumoke slowly gave in to him, kissing him with a mixture of fury and pent-up passion, both of them oblivious of their surroundings. It was the sound of Lanre’s phone that jerked them out of their emotional cocoon, they pulled away from each other startled.

“Oh my God!” Jumoke said regretfully.

Lanre silenced his phone and stared intently at her.

“We were blindsided by circumstances… “

Jumoke shook her head violently, holding her face in her hands.

“Give us another chance. Let’s be a family!” he urged.

“No, no, no…!” she said frantically, getting into her car and zooming off.

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25 thoughts on “We Knew Them Part 34

  • There is no way lanre can have jumoke, he doesn’t deserve such a great lady. pls Lola don’t do this. For Christ sake i beg of u. for ur information Lanre deserve to suffer

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    1. Thumbs up Lola! I talk am before. I only feel sorry for Derick and Toyin who are caught up in the middle of this. Toyin will lose the pregnancy when she finds out about Hope then she’ll angrily leave for wherever they came from. Derick and Gloria will make a good couple. Jumoke gets to forgive her mum because she now feels first hand what it is like to be rejected by one’s daughter. Lanre never ever lets go of Jumoke and they all live happily ever after. How about that?

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  • Did I ever meeting dat I hate d sound of ringing fones..

    Dah kiss was a terrible mistake esp 4 Lanre wu is engaged n s anoda father 2 b..
    He wants em 2 b a family again?? Well he Sud learn hw 2 tel both his family n jummy d truth

    Lola pls dont let tins geh more complicated… Ion tink ma hrt cn carry it

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  • Lola you broke my heart. 😢. How could you let this happen??? We begged you!

    Anyway, one kiss doesn’t mean anything. Her brain will jump start again.

    She sef. Cam dan small fest. Kai.

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  • If Jumoke makes the mistake of going back to Lanre then she is in for a bigger mistake than the first. Lanre is not even a straight forward person compared to Derrick.He hides a lot of things from his fiancee and all that. How can you use a kiss to disarm a woman who is already on the edge. Derrick would have just gone if he was in Lanre’so shoes.I am not even saying the storyline should not have Jumoke going back to Lanre but make sure you include where she was bitten twice.

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  • Jumoke will be making a bigger mistake than the first if she goes back to Lanre. He does not worth it cost he has a lot of issues. He hides a lot of things from his fiancee and he is such a creepy fellow, using a kiss to diary a woman that is already edgy tells a lot a him.Derrick would have just gone away that using emotions on a woman. The emotions he could not control when he impregnated her is still playingnon him. I am not even saying the storyline should not go in the direction of Jumoke and Lanre coming together but make sure you include where Jumoke was bitten twice.

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  • ha!!! lola please don’t break my heart o! Lanre and Jumoke don’t belong together o! Hope has to realize that the world is not a story book. Derrick is a good guy fa. That kiss is mill and boons ‘ish’ o! And sweet kisses dont make a marriage. ha! I’m crying for Jumoke and Derrick!!!

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  • Dear Lola,

    I hope, i would not ban you from my laptop and mobile devices for this suspense is getting way too much. I start Mondays thinking we would soon get to the end of the story and then Friday arrives and the twist is worse off than where Monday started.

    You are a good writer but please do not torture your readers with a good story. I have exams starting next week and all I do daily is thinking and postulating the likely decisions Jumoke would end up taking. I have to keep reminding myself that it is all fiction.

    Lola jo, let us hurry up and end this story. If you have work to give us to enable you conclude, please send the task and let your readers sort it out sharply.


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  • Omo see comments!!! Anyway, I’m team Derick all the way (until my Oga at the top decides to say another thing). Lanre has several issues….baggages. He doesn’t even know how to fight for he’s own. Still behaves like a “mummy’s boy”. F’awor’aja radaada (In Jenifa’s voice). Ohhhh, I’m taking this too personal jooor. #enoughsaid

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  • It has got to be team Derrick i beg of you pls dont fall my ✋ na so reconciliation dey happen…. Mtchew lanre is beginning to annoy me jor…. Well done Lola may God bless you. I’m anxiously waiting for tomorrow

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